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Succubus Geisha by Doe-Rae-Me Succubus Geisha by Doe-Rae-Me
Eh I don't like the face.
Done for a freebie on gaia u vu
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quiet--nights Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I hope this doesn't sound mean since I really like this piece, but I think you should look into studying anatomy, bone structure and you should really, really study how boobs look.

I love how you colored this picture and I love the expression in the face, how she seems modest, but then she's showing off some of her body. However, I think the whole drawing would look better without all the shiny animu uguu stuff (like on the edges of boobs and the bow and kimono)

Like I said, I hope this doesn't sound mean. I know I shouldn't critique since I can hardly draw myself, but I'm just giving some tips.
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Doe-Rae-Me Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012
♥I'll take what you said and work on that.
thankyou love.
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